My newest poem...

Please rrc my newest poem, Headed for a Breakdown. I'll return the favor!

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1053053

No one??? Boohoo... lol

Done. Rated and commented.

Please do;
"Accident or Murder?"
It's really not explicit. So I hope you aren't turned off by it at all. There was one word that I swore. Oh well, I hope you like it. XD

Done! No, I wasn't turned off by your poem at all! I thought it was very truthful.

Any others?!?!

And please rate it, too. Thanks ^^

Done...