My first poem

Hey, I`m new on this forum, and i would like to present you my work. I`m new in the poetry/poems domain but in one night I managed to write a poem. Hope you enjoy it. Cheers

Welcome to the forum, hope you enjoy it... before you know it you'll be addicted to it P&Q rocks
Pretty good for your first poem... keep it up and try to make them longer, get all your feelings into the poem.

I hope I`ll keep it up. I try to write about death, about misery, but i cant think how to relate them. My next one shall respect this two things.

Anyone else ?

You had some excellent poems. I left you with some ideas to put into your poetry as you continue to write. :) [I commented both of yours.]

Please do;
"Love is a Mystery Solve it."
"Ocean View."

Thank you.

New one. I hope you like it :), I comment back :P