1-1 Deal. [[Leap of Faith]]

For this deal, I want you to choose one of my featured poems and comment on it. In return, I will comment any poem of your choosing.

Quick Rules;
1. Vote. Please!
2. Don't give me a 1-3 liner. If you do, I will not comment back.
3. Leave your title here, otherwise I will not return the comment.
4. Be honest, give me honest critique. Constructive Criticism is accepted!!!!

How many more do i have left =]

I commented and voted on "Two Hearts that Once Danced Together". Could you please return the favour on either one of my latest three?

Thanks. ^_^

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Done. :)
Thank you.

Anyone else?