When It Rains; It Pours. [[1-1]]

New poem up called,
"When It Rains; It Pours."

Would appreciate some critisism on this, and honest comments. If you don't have anything to say but "good job, great poem, blah blah blah." I don't wanna hear it. You're wasting my time. No one liners, if you leave one.. don't expect a comment from me. :]

Put some thought into it, comment it, rate it, and leave your title.

Thanks.

Done.

"Frozen"

Thanks.

Done...

nature weeping plz

Done :)

Anyone else?

^ Done, thanks!

Anyone else? :)