They'll Benefit You, Not Me [[1 for 1]]

New poem;
"They'll Benefit You, Not Me."
-It's probably not my very best. It was a quick poem where I just wrote down how I felt.

Rules;
~Don't give me a one-three liner. Expect no return if you do.
~Give me honest feedback, pleeeease!
~Leave your title, and don't forget to vote. =)

Done
a critical analysis
lol
do one of mine that you havent already lol
idc really

Lexie

Done=)
No problem, I was expecting some critical comments, because I know it wasn't a good poem. It was short and didn't have much thought.

Still open!
Anyone else? :)

I'll do yours right now [:
And please do any of my new
ones -- whichever catches your eye.

Thanks!

I did Por Diem =)

Thank you for your comment!

Anyone else? Still open..