Why Suicide? Read and Comment (will return)

HEy it would be awesome if you could check out one of my earlier poems.

Titled "Why Suicide?"

I would like constructive criticism
more than one line also..

Thanks I will return the favor :D

Done :)
Could you please do :

`Fractured Twilight Librettos

Thanks, love .
..__MiNDYY

``Edit:

Oh, my . Scratch that . HAHA I just noticed that you did my piece when I did yours ! XD

Done...

keep holding on, plzz

thanxx