The Long Journey of Love [[ 1 for 1 ]]

New one up.
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I DO NOT want 1 liners.. Don't even give me a 2 or 3 liner either, I want to know what you think of the poem. Don't give me two lines of "Good work, good job, keep writing..." blah blah blah.. I'm sick of reading useless comments. Don't waste my time =) If you do, I won't return the comment.

Just leave your title after you finish, thanks!