Good Deal. :]

Okay, so here's the deal. I have five poems that I'd love comments on.

Titles;
"Two Lovers"
"If You Look Harder You Might See"
"Love Isn't Imaginary."
"I'm So Over You"
"The Long Journey of Love."
"I Can Go On Without You."

The Deals;
1 for 1
2 for 2
3 for 3
4 for 4
5 for 5
6 for 6

Pick a deal, and get started. I want thoughtful lengthy comments. Please give me critisism.. It will only help me improve my writing. You won't hurt my feelings. So don't be afraid to tell me what you think!

Don't leave me a 1-2 liner, otherwise I will not return the favor.

*-DON'T FORGET TO VOTE!-*

So there you are. What are you waiting for? :]

I did two.

Please do "Crying Shame" & "His Eyes".

Thanks.
=]

I did two!

can you do two of mine that doesnt have that many comments.

thank you. :)

p.s. i tried to give contructive critisism on the poems i commented but i couldnt really find anything wrong with them.

I got very carried away, and left some pretty lengthy comments.

But, anyway.. you both are finished =]

Anyone else?

Me, too, please! Please do any on my featured list. Thanks!!

^ Done. Thanks.

Still open!
Anyone? :]

I will read a couple of yours and ect.

Done Frozen in Time.

Okayy, just leave your titles when you are finished. :]

Do whatever two that jump out at you...i would have commented more but I can't really find anything wrong with your poems. :)

Done with Rusted Silver. :]

Umm, yeah, sure go for it. Just comment any of mine that aren't love poems. Yeah, I get logged out too with love poems. So I just go back and log in but.. no biggie. Just do two non-love poems for me.

I've done the 2 for 2

I've commentd and rated 5 on both of them

I'd like Anwsering Machine done, and one of your choice =]

Valet Every Wish and Courtney are finished.

Soso, you never left a comment. If you did, sorry I missed it. Please post back here when you are finished. Thanks...

By the way, I added another one. So now it's up to a 6 comment deal!

Still open!
Anyone. :]]?