Fair enough deal.

  • Ash
    17 years ago

    For any comments you make on my poems, I'll double them and rate them ofcourse. Please leave the titles of the poems you would like comments on. Thank you kindly

  • Lizaveta
    17 years ago

    I did 2.
    could you please rrc:

    *"while the smoke settles"
    *"icy emptiness"
    *"timy little fractures"
    *"november rain"

    thanks in advance!

  • Ash
    17 years ago

    All done! Thank you kindly for your comments. I appreciate it and really enjoyed reading your poems.