Am I doing this right?

Go Back...

Lets go back to the Beginning the good days.
Back when everything was perfect
The good times and never the bad and everything was good
Why can't we go back?

All the times you made me laugh til I cried
The jokes that would make no sense
Back when you would make fun of me and I would be 'mad'
Why can't we go back?

Back when we stared in each others eyes
The geeky smiles when we'd see each other
All the times you picked on me
Why can't we go back?

That's all I have I wanted to make sure I was doing it right before I went any farther

You're writing and repetition is good, but u seem to be usin some charecters which my comp. doesn't allow..perhaps replace those with the englsih counterparts?

the imegery is great! your actual thoughts and such are really good! keep going!

I posted the final copy and 2 other poems