This Is The World

I don't usually ask for comments on poems, but for my poem "This Is The World" I am looking for the opinion of servicemen and women (or ex service folks) or people who are active in political or pacifist movements of any persuasion. If you fit this bill please check the poem out and leave me a comment. You can be assured if you have something you think might pique my curiosity I will check it out.

Note to people who leave "this is kwl" or "i like this. plz comment on my pomes" comments: they'll be removed. And no, I don't care about ratings because I imagine some people will be offended.

But thanks all the same for taking the time to follow it through. :-)