Good deall=)

  • CourtneyyContageous
    16 years ago

    1 for 1
    2 for 2
    3 for 3
    4 for 4

    four poems to choose from;;

    A Perfect Example of Imperfection.
    Learning To Fly With Broken Wings.
    Anwsering Machine.
    [and one of your choice]

    read
    rate
    & comment.

    then come back here and post which deal you've made. and which poems you also want commented. thx.

    =)

  • Courageous Dreamer
    16 years ago

    I did "A Perfect Example of Imperfection." & "Learning to Fly with Broken Wings."

    2-2 deal.

    Please do the two newest poems I have posted.

    Thanks in advance. (:

  • CourtneyyContageous
    16 years ago

    Done=)

    thank you for your comments.

    & i hoped you enjoyed my critique as well.

  • khobo
    16 years ago

    2 for 2

    I commented on "A Perfect Example of Imperfection" and "Two Lovers."

    Uhh, you can comment on any I guess. It doesn't matter all that much to me. If you want suggestions, I guess I would say the latest ones? Thanks ^^

  • BREEawNUHH
    16 years ago

    I'll do "A Perfect Example of Imperfection" in just a second.
    [:

    Edit: Done. Please do "Cold, Lonely Road".
    Thankssss.
    =]