Good deall=)

1 for 1
2 for 2
3 for 3
4 for 4

four poems to choose from;;

A Perfect Example of Imperfection.
Learning To Fly With Broken Wings.
Anwsering Machine.
[and one of your choice]

read
rate
& comment.

then come back here and post which deal you've made. and which poems you also want commented. thx.

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I did "A Perfect Example of Imperfection." & "Learning to Fly with Broken Wings."

2-2 deal.

Please do the two newest poems I have posted.

Thanks in advance. (:

Done=)

thank you for your comments.

& i hoped you enjoyed my critique as well.

2 for 2

I commented on "A Perfect Example of Imperfection" and "Two Lovers."

Uhh, you can comment on any I guess. It doesn't matter all that much to me. If you want suggestions, I guess I would say the latest ones? Thanks ^^

I'll do "A Perfect Example of Imperfection" in just a second.
[:

Edit: Done. Please do "Cold, Lonely Road".
Thankssss.
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