Feedback for feedback :)

  • SilentSuicide
    16 years ago

    Can someone rate and comment my poetry?
    id greatly appreciate it.
    i'll comment and rate back
    on any poem u wish
    or any poem in general.
    i love giving feed back
    and id love if i could get some myself

    Please&+Thannk you<3

  • Lonely Rider
    16 years ago

    Done...

    Keep writing... u have talent Dear :)

    "Missing Moments" plz

    thanxx

  • SilentSuicide
    16 years ago

    DONE :)

    and thank you.
    i like your work as well<3

  • Courageous Dreamer
    16 years ago

    Done. :)

    Please do my latest, "Wasting Time Away With You."

    Thank you

  • SilentSuicide
    16 years ago

    I appreaciate your help. but the way i wrote my poem was in c ertain tence ya know? like instead of writin "your smile makes her feel good" i said "you" smile meaning that the person smiles to make her feel good.

    Its just the way i wrote it

    thank you tho.

  • SilentSuicide
    16 years ago

    Anyone else?..