SilentSuicide
17 years ago
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Can someone rate and comment my poetry? |
Lonely Rider
17 years ago
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Done... |
SilentSuicide
17 years ago
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DONE :) |
Courageous Dreamer
17 years ago
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Done. :) |
SilentSuicide
17 years ago
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I appreaciate your help. but the way i wrote my poem was in c ertain tence ya know? like instead of writin "your smile makes her feel good" i said "you" smile meaning that the person smiles to make her feel good. |
SilentSuicide
17 years ago
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Anyone else?.. |