Can some one plz comment n rate my poem

Can some one please comment or rate my poem n thx if you do

If you rate or comment my poem I show the love back

Okay, I did three of yours.
They were full of grammar mistakes, and such.. Which is why I think a lot of people back out when reading your poems. But, I tried my best to help you with the mistakes you made. I am SO sorry if I came across very rude.

Please be as honest as possible with my latest.

Thank You.

I did one.
it was a lil' hard to get through for the same reason....all the grammar mistakes...

i also am sry if i came across as rude.
i ment it in the best possible way.
i wish you luck in your futrue writing.
<3
Samantha