My first haiku (Noor)

  • Goodbye
    16 years ago

    Hi everyone,
    I wrote my first haiku now. I would love to get some feedback. I will return a favour back.

    Thank you..

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  • Bugg
    16 years ago

    Please do my latest ,"Dream Me"? Thank you!

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  • Courageous Dreamer
    16 years ago

    "Freezing in the Arms of Loneliness."
    Thanks.

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  • Goodbye
    16 years ago

    I did your poem. Sounds like you were dreaming above the skies... Young love in the air ;)

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  • BREEawNUHH
    16 years ago

    Doing it now.

    "Can I Ask You A Question?", please?
    Thanks.

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  • Goodbye
    16 years ago

    "Can I Ask You A Question?" done.

    I could ask you a question...is this poem inspired by real event? ;)

    Well done by-the-way..

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  • BREEawNUHH
    16 years ago

    Part of it, yes. He already knows that I love him, and he tells me he loves me, also. :]

    & thank youuu.
    :]

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  • Goodbye
    16 years ago

    Wow, congratulations! May you two be blessed then!

    I am happy for you. :)

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