Critiquing mood ===> Killer of Time

Can you read some of mine please? Thanks!

I could really use some critiquing. If you could check out my featured poems that would be great. I'll check out a few of yours. :]

You still haven't critiqued any of mine. You said you would, and I've done two of yours, mister.

Your critique didn't help in the least. You didn't offend, and you didn't praise. It wouldn't have made a difference if you didn't comment at all. At least make an effort to understand something, or don't bother at all.

i want to see what you have to say about mine