Feedback really needed, 2 for 3

Some of you may know me but most probably wont, but anyways i'm back from being away for about 2 years i think and the reason for that is ecause i had little time. But now i've freed some time again. The reason why i really need your feedback is because i started writing songs( being a musician, it's a normal thing to do but still i want to know what you think about them). So far i've uploaded 2 of my songs:
"Letting you go"
"Your fool in love"

I would appreciate if you could read the and tell me what you think. Of course you just tell me what poems you would like me to read and i'll be happy to do it for you. If you do my 2 songs i'll do 3 of your poems :)