"Finding the Good Within the Bad." - 1 FOR 1 -

New poem up.. (posted on Monday)
Please read, rate, comment.
Don't leave me 1-2 liners.. if you do, I will NOT return the comment.
Please be honest. Feel free to give me honest critique and suggestions to improve.
Leave title here after finished.

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Lovely. Wonderful. I love poetry. One of the standing reasons why is because of how inspirational it can be. I enjoyed the read. I don't really know what to suggest on my part. Perhaps 'Treason Honor" if you haven't, or "Spoiled Omelet". Thank you in advance.

^^ Done. :]

Anyone else??

Innocence (story) If enough people think the character sounds real I might make it longer and ch ange some info. I leave long comments though.

^ Thank you for your comment. I praised it. I didn't at all take it to the offensive, I thought that it was very detailed and helpful.

I'll get to yours now.

Thanks I was a bit worried :) I know some people tend to get very defensive when it comes to things. It was a good poem but again everyone's different and I tried to somewhat give some advice.

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Done.

Your story was amazing, continue with it. And let me know when you have it finished. I'd be happy to read it!

Anyone else??