Need help fixing a poem

- Name : Angel Eyes
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Angel Eyes
16 years ago

Pleas read my poem "living fo u" and tell me wich version sounds better the first one or second

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- Name : Catastrophic Beauty
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Catastrophic Beauty
16 years ago

Done :)

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- Name : Angel Eyes
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Angel Eyes
16 years ago

Thank you

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- Name : Catastrophic Beauty
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Catastrophic Beauty
16 years ago

No problem :)

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