GAHH

Hey peoples. For the first time in a long time I've shown someone (outside of poems) some of my poetry... and she pretty much told me it sucks...

So I was wondering if you could check out a few of my poems and give me an HONEST opinion of them. You don't have to vote or comment, and you don't have to read them all..

I just want to see what everyone thinks..

Many thanks,
Bethany

Not the place for this post. If you want to request people read your work there is a place for that.

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/discussion/list.html?topic_id=1453

But yeah. i will go check out some of your poems

^^What was the point of your post? She directed him where these requests are supposed to go. Pretty uncalled for.

XXxXhes the everything i cudve asked forXxXx, i am so sick of going onto post after post and seeing you make rude comments. and you're the one that wants to have a baby? you're very immature.

beautiful chaos told the person exactly what the mods are gonna say. geez. =|

^ totally agree.
XXxXhes the everything i cudve asked forXxXx stop posting a billion threads. They are all contradicting each other, I want to be pregnant, I want to lose weight, I want a job, blah blah blah. look, look through some other threads that are similar topics and see the advice there. By the way, based off this site alone, I'd say you are way too immature to have a baby right now.

So just calm down will you?

Goshies people. Calm down. I will have no fighting in my topics.

I'm a SHE by the way.

Thanks,
Bethany