Rate And Comment {good deals}

Finally back, writers block has gone!

*celebrates*
Okay now lets's get serious.

1 for 1
2 for 2
3 for3

Now If your doing more than one, you may chose which ever one/s you want to R/R/C

1-My new one 'A Crack In The Shattered Life'

Is one required to be commented =)

Please be honest with your comments. 1-2 lines not accepted. And rate honestly as well. BUT if you down under-rate. I would like to know why, and maybe have some tips on how to make it better.

Thanks.

Innocence

THanks!

I don't see the new poem?

^^ ahh im sorry im editing it and stuff.

itll be back up soon though =)

***closed due to editing***