[3-for-3]

  • BREEawNUHH
    16 years ago

    Mmk. I would love feedback on my latest three. [Read, rate, and comment.] [**By the way -- you don't have to do ALL three of them. It was just easier to use that as the title.**]

    01. "Thirst For Blood" - It's for a contest, and it's a Triple Triolet.
    02. "Picture Perfect" - It's for a contest. [This one really means a lot to me, so please be honest.]
    03. "Lose Yourself" - It's for a contest, and it's a Triquatrain.

    - No one/two/three liners. Those will do me NO good, whatsoever. If you leave them, I will NOT return the favour.
    - Actually VOTE. It's part of the deal. [if you do not vote on mine, I will not vote on yours.] Be honest with your comments & votes.
    - Leave titles, please. [Not required, but much appreciated.]

    Thanks. <3

    //P.S. I apologize in advance if I do not get to your poems right away. I'm busy getting ready for school to start, and I'll be working in the evenings, but I WILL get to them. <3

  • Sole
    16 years ago

    I know it's not the deal.. But I already commented on yur 'Thirst For Blood' poem, so I commented th other two in the hopes I could get a return favour on one or two of my featured poems :)

    If not, no worries, I loved your poems.

    Sole xx

    Edit:
    I take that back, I commented someone elses poem 'Thirst for Blood' for the same contest.. Hehe. I commented it and.. just wow. Loving your poetry.

    Like before, featured poems please :)

  • BREEawNUHH
    16 years ago

    ^ Done.

    [Sorry it took me a while. Had a pretty busy day.]

    -- Anyone else?

  • BrokenREALiTy
    16 years ago

    Edited:
    Oh jeez, hope I'm not too late. I'd like to change the title though. If you're already doing or done that piece, then oh well.

    I did one. I'll probably do the other two tomorrow.
    Could you please do :

    `Through Fishnet Gardens

    Thanks :)
    ..__MiNDYY

  • BREEawNUHH
    16 years ago

    ^ Done. :]

    & thank you for the meaningful comment. :]

    Anyone elseeee?
    :D

  • Empathy
    16 years ago

    Done...

    Could you please do "Staring at The Slate of Asphalt" in return?

    Thank you in advance.

  • BREEawNUHH
    16 years ago

    ^ Doing it right nowwww.
    :]