New Dark/Vampire Poem

Please check out my latest poem 'Vampire' I don't really have much interest in the horror side of things, but wrote it for a contest as a challenge. Would be good to know what you think.
Of course, I'll return any favours ;)

Sole x

Edit: Oh, and if you want to comment more (my latest 3 would be nice) I'll match the favours..

Wow, Sole. That was a wonderful read. Done..

My latest pleeease =)

Nice work.

Might I suggest reading "Corruption of Sin" as a return of the favor please?

Thank you in advance.

Done and Done. Cheers :)

Still Open..

I did that one. ANd one other. I tried doing a third, but it was a love poem. so i couldn't.

thanks ahead.
Lexie

Amazing work there. i was so involed in the story.