Two New Poems! [2 for 2]

  • Blissful
    16 years ago

    "Swallows her Tongue with Words Unsaid"
    "Raindrops Kiss her Abandoned Tears"

    Two new poems in need of some feedback.

    Honestly comment and rate one and I will do one of yours.
    Honestly comment and rate two I will do two of yours.

    *Leave a one-liner
    expect the same in return*

    Thank you. :]

  • Blissful
    16 years ago

    ...anyone?

  • Austin
    16 years ago

    I did your poems. Good job.

    Could you RRC "Warwick Avenue" and then I don't care which other poem you do. Any of them are fine with me. Thanks!

  • Nobodys Hero
    16 years ago

    Yea sure i'll do it could you review my newest 1 Thank You XD

  • NyellMoonlight
    16 years ago

    I commented/rated both :)

    Please do: "The Sky Is Falling" and "Feel It With Me [Clouds Painted Over Words]". Thanks in advance.

  • Blissful
    16 years ago

    Done Austin. :]

  • Christopher Hantman
    16 years ago

    Ill do yours now,
    if you could do any of mine,
    preferabbly the oens with less feedback.
    thanks

  • Blissful
    16 years ago

    Done Nobodys Hero. :]

  • Normal is the Watchword
    16 years ago

    Fragmented

  • Blissful
    16 years ago

    Done NyellMoonlight :]