Velvet Whispers of a Tempted Heart. [1 for 2]

New poem!

`Velvet Whispers of a Tempted Heart.'

I would really appreciate some honest feedback on it...its kind of different then what I usually write so I am open to any critique. Honestly comment and rate my newest poem and I will do the same for TWO of your poems.

~leave a one-liner
expect the same in return.~

Thank you. :]

I'll do it. (:

Could you please do:
`You're Beautiful
and
`Midnight Serenade

Thankss.

Donee.
Any of mine that you haven't already done, thank you muchly.

jess ~

Done :) I loved it.

Please comment/rate:

* The Last Song We'll Ever Sing
* Locked in Time

Thanks in advance.

Done Incomplete Riot :]

Done :)

can you comment "somewhere only we know"

Done ether :]