Write Me A Poem!

So here's my story and here's the deal, i'm been having lots of guy trouble to start for my 9th grade year. And for some reason writing isn't helping me get through it, so i had a bf we broke up, and it just seems like i can't trust him and vise versa,(however you spell that). And then we got back together like a week later,but then i broke up with him again. Were not gonna date, but lately our relationship in general has just been a sinking ship and drowning driver!

I can't write it out of my system, so maybe some1 else can......

I give really good comments and title suggestions.

And i'm willing to give both for however many you like (maxium 10 poems).

I don't care what the title is or the poem as long as it relates to my problem. If you need more information just PM me.

There will only be one winner unless i really really like the poem, and of course the entry will be added to my favorites.

And you might think that your helping yourself out cause it's free comments and stuff, but it's helping me out way more.

but hey at least im still passing my classes i guess.....

Due Date Oct 25 for now, if it needs to be extended will do!

Please sign up firsthand! thank you have fun :)

*FINISHED*
xDreamsXyouXwishXaponx
MyLoneyDisaster
CyberSaiyan
Theecstasyofsuicide

Does it matter if its old or new??

No it does not,

Do you love me?
Do you care?
I'm so tired of waiting,
Or wondering if your there,
Are we through?

Or are you just mad?
I hate these games,
They make me so sad,
Why do you make me cry?
Why?

If you want her they get her,
Cause waiting on you is taking forever,
Its breaking my heart,
And I'm loosing control,

This is because,
You stole my soul,
So walk away,
Forget I'm here,

Do you love me?
Do you care?
Cause babe you need to understand,
This isn't fair!

This is one of my older poems but, I thought it kinda fit your releationship problem...

Have a good day,
Kathleen

Thank keep posting!

By My Side

I want to be,
next to you.
I miss you when,
you're far away.
being with you,
makes my day.

I need you to be near,
when you're here,
I have no fear.
but when you leave,
when you're gone,
I'm forgotten.
abandoned.
left out,
in the cold.

I cry,
I die,
Inside,
it kills me.
I can't survive,
without you.
I can't deny,
I need you..

I need you to,
be by my side,
for me to hide,
sheltered behind.
this burning desire,
like gasoline,
on fire
ecstasy-
only higher,
but then I learn...
you're a liar

a cheat
a sneak
a crook
like, a coded book..

a story consisting,
of torn pages.
and forgotten,
lies.
i forgot to read,
between the
broken lines.

now I see,
how you're a fake.
it's like finally,
I've begun to wake.
from a clouded dream,
an incubus
of screams.
a nightmare,
of lies,
atleast,
that's what it seems.

now everything,
is back,
to the way
it used to be.
nothing is right,
there is no more light,
the world is
covered,
smoldered in night.
the eyes of the people,
are shadowed,
in fright.

I can't look you
in the eyes.
can't face,
your demonic lies.
I can never,
bear the sight.
because of you,
I will never
be alright.
your lies show the fact,
that you never feel contrite.
this spark of hatred
is what,
you ignite.

your lies,
they kill me,
burn me inside.
make me feel,
a desperate
need to hide.
can't you tell?
that it's you
I despise?

please leave me.
just forget me.
I desperately need,
for you to regret me.

just find,
someone else.
to torment.
to torture.
to curse.

and to make their lives
miserably worse

please find,
another girl,
to kill,
with your lies.
because no more tears,
will fall
from these eyes.
these cheeks,
shall be dry.
I will never again cry...

But I want,
you to know,
that I still
need you...
by my side.

No More Truth

No more truth to be told tonight
As your eyes stare helplessly into mine
The day is over and the night is long
My fears and hopes are intertwined.

The love we once shared together
Has now pushed us too far apart
The beginning of the end is upon us now
Loneliness and dismay have flooded my heart.

I can no longer tell you the truth
For it is too hard to speak the words aloud
I must retract the love I swore to you
And break the promises that I vowed.

As our love dissolves tonight
I still yearn to feel your touch
But the reason I cannot continue on
Is that I love you much to much.

I cannot pretend that I no longer care
I have to be honest with my soul
I let body get wrapped up in love
And let my heart take control.

Maybe I just needed the thought
That someone else could care
I was weak and I was vulnerable
And suddenly, you were there.

I let you in without a thought
And you quickly took full control
Leaving behind my wants and my desires
Crushing the pride of my soul.

Knowing that you are (still) a good person
I was afraid to live without you
Knowing you were not my perfect match
I allowed my love to accrue.

But staring into your eyes
I know that your heart is pure
I hope you find your true soul mate
Or whatever it is you are searching for.

I cannot tell you any lies
But the truth is too hard to say
I cannot share the feelings I have
Which is why we must part separate ways.

Apart we can find the peace
That we searched for during our endeavor
All I wish for from this day forward
Is that you find happiness and love forever.

Together we were wrong
Individually we are right
We are better off apart my love
But No more truth will be said tonight.

Baby, It's Not Enough

I think there's something inside me that I can't quite explain
the Milk way forgot to count it's stars,
and I've lost all contemplation of good memories.

maybe I was wrong to forget, or maybe I was wrong to even know in the first place,
but baby you've got me in tangles and I can't ride this out alone.

we can shiver and we can shake, but baby that's not enough.

let's take this serious, we'll take it slow,
for the sake of god, we'll just let him figure it out.
each memory we posses can rock our boat and tip it over;
we never knew how to swim in this sea of lies, but we're trying to keep afloat --
you can save me, only if you try, but I'm not sure I'm ready to let you go.

the tips of our tongues play tunes we can't imagine;
they whispered silently to one another, but they're saying everything that needs to be said.
Baby, let's forget the sunset and paint a new song.

I'd hate to tell you of the trickery around you,
or about the edges turning black.
you're taking my breath away and no one told you'd it'd get any easier to breath;
I'd hate to be the one to tell you.

it was like a symphony of wails, the way you tell me you love me,
it's like the city's built of steel and feeling's just ironic.
too bad we're lost in each other, or maybe we're lost in ourselves --

we can shiver and we can shake, but baby that's not enough.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

Omg these r great! keep posting!

Im prolly going 2 extend the date, just to see what else i can get

>>>Let you slip away<<<

See when i gazed in your eyes
felt like i was alive
but now your gone
not by my side
i feel so dead
I'm sorry for what i did
I'm sorry for what i said
babe you need to understand
I'm lost without your love
I'm done without your smile
it might of took some time to realize
but Hun you made my life worthwhile
all i do is think about you
boy i don't know what to do
but ill alway be waiting for you
any time any day
boo you were my life
but i let you slip away...

Here's My Submission ;)

Copyright 2008, Stephen White

http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1058238

It's Best to Just Pretend...

We spent so long constructing what went down with just a word;
We had to blow our pyramid of cards to send them crashing down.
I thought we were a sturdy couple, but the road we chose was tough
And at the end of each disaster comes a moment with no sound.

*you are my silence*
*I am yours*
*together we won't
(speak a word)*

I tried to tape together what was left of our connecting part
But found that not enough existed, never did I touch your heart;
I didn't know what I was doing; don't know just what game you played
But in the *silence* I can see that
{we will never be the same}

You have me here on pause but I can see what's going to be played
And yet I'm fine while stuck in pause 'cause I don't want to face the change;
Don't want to let this day go by and, along with it, you as well;
I'm fine pretending as the ground comes near
{I never}
(even)
[fell]

We spent so long constructing what went down with just a single word
And in the end it's best to just pretend
{I wasn't}
(even)
[hurt]

YOu know i just recently went through a heart break and a song that really helped me through it was "If i were a boy by Beyonce" you should look it up it is really amazing :)

Oh thanks i will when i get a chance, but i really like your quote :)

took me a little bit 2 get that one ;)

These look so good and i thank you for all you guys help so far,

but im extending the date longer, i wanna see a couple more........

so keep posting and tell ppl about it!

whoo! whoo! whoo! we're all cheering for ya'll

What quote? haha

"He gave her 11 roses, and 1 fake one and said i'll love you until each rose dies."

I told a lot of ppl about it yday and no one understood it haha

Oh thats cool haha yeah i thought it was cute

Walking Away

I thought I could trust you
I thought what we had was real
But if it was then why am I sitting here
Wondering if I will ever heal

You hurt me so much
You deceived me in the worst way
You told me you loved me
You lied to me every single day

You filled my head with hopes
Dreams I should've thought twice about having
You filled my world with nothing but pain
All the lying, deceiving, backstabbing

And when I finally had the strength to let go
You did everything to pull me back in
You used me and played me like a fool
I was deceived again and again

But not anymore, no
I finally got smart enough to walk away
I remember you saying I was weak for not working it out
But I think I was strong for walking away

This One is for Every Girl

I'm sitting here alone again realizing just how unfair life really is
I just don't understand, what happened to my happily ever after?

Thats why I gotta write this one,
I gotta write this one here for every girl who's ever had her heart broken because he chose HER instead
For every girl who gave it her all,
Who believed all his lies and ended up alone in the end

For every girl who spends her nights dreaming and wishing for that guy
The one who will love her not despite her faults
But love her faults all the same
It's like they say, if they don't appreciate your worst
Then they damn sure don't deserve your best

So I gotta keep writing this one for those girls who tried to change
The girls who are beautiful and wonderful as their self
But attempted to change for him
The ones that did their best to please him but still couldn't make him stay

Also for the ones who refused to change
Because they realized their worth
And decided that they wouldn't degrade their selves
Just to make some guy happy
The ones who wouldn't compromise their values for a guy who couldn't even appreciate everything else they had already compromised

This one is for the girl who loves him with everything she has
And just wishes he cared more
The one who wishes he didn't lie, cheat, and deceive
Yet forgives him for it anyway

The girl who stares at the stars every night
And wishes on each one for him to come back
Even though he wasn't good enough the first time
She's still willing to try it a second, a third, a fourth...

The girl who just wants that fairy tale ending for once,
Because she just needs to see if it's really real
The girl who keeps trying and trying,
Giving her all away to guys who just take and take
This one is for you, all of you

K that's it no more posting people!

These are so good!

I will have to results in by mon Nov. 3rd! :) Thanks

OMG! Where does time fly? I could have sworn i was finished with this already!

Well 1st i would like to thank everybody for participating this was awesome!

So it has come down to a tie, so both winners will recieve something :)

The winners are:

By My Side By: My Lonely Disaster

&

Walking Away By: Sensual Goddess

Thank You! :)

PM to Confirm!