Do me a favor?

Can you guys please read my poems & songs? i don't have many comments & i really want to write better!

please? :)

Yeah I did three of yours can you do my three latest please... your a pretty good writer, but i feel the need to tell you, you know poems don't always have to rhyme sometimes they can be free verse... hope you can take my advice.

Done.

Could you do

Take a Bow (Rise Up)
As the Sands of Time Flow

both of those are songs I've written

Im not very experianced and i need some comments and tell the honest truth.i need to learn how to improve my writng. i'd say my best poems are 'heart' and 'never see me cry' and 'Queen Of Hearts'