Get Serious Constructive Critisism Here!

Tell me the title/s of the poem/s you want me to critique and i will.

No title, no critique.

Please be sure i WILL NOT say your poem is great if i don't think it is. However, what i do think needs tweeking i will try to give advise to help you improve. This also means by asking me to critique, if i say something you do not like, i beg you do not take a fit at me and act childish (like i've known to happen.) If i offend you i'm sorry, it's just my opinion.

If in my opinion if the poem needs work i am liable to break the poem apart, please be ready for that. However in most poems there are good points, they are the things i enjoy commenting on most of all.

Also please give me time to critique, i am quite busy at the moment.

Thanks.

Mines,

Human
Caspian Sea
Untouched
Satans Prayer

Can you read "The Cure" and "Someone Better". Thanks!

I would be grateful if you could read the following poems of mine:

Journey on a Desert Train
Seafaring Fantasy

Thank you, Silver
--Lydia

Thanks for the chance to critique some amazing work.
Killer Of Time: You’re welcome, and I will take a look when I have time.
Scarlette: I’m sorry I couldn’t be any help, I did enjoy your work. I have only looked at a couple, I will take a look at the others when I have time.
who!knows and Lydia O – I’ve commented on yours as far as I can see.
~*aLi*~ - I was serious when I said no title, no critique. Sorry.
Leah20 – I had previously commented on “The Cure” so I just did “Someone Better.”

If anyone disagrees with anything I have said, you do not have to take my advise. If anyone wants to discuss it in a civilised manor I welcome you to.

If anyone else wishes critique, post the title/s here! Please make sure you read the first post, by me before.

Semper Fi: Who am I then, nobody?

Silver, I just want to express my thanks to you for taking the time to read my work and for your very well thought out comments.
--Lydia

please check out "Into You" thank ta much

keep rockin

Emmerz

If you don;t mind I would liek you to read some of my works You can choose how many or which ones but please check out two in particular

25 cent execution
Last I love you

Another Day
When Did You Stop Loving Me?

Please and thankyou..I've had the most horrid writer's block lately and think these could prolly use some help...

hey could u check out a few of mine

Blind Faith. Amazing soungs... One cut two cut three cut four, unmentioned pain, Dad, life's simple pleasures, Sterotypes, related strangers and crimsom tears and should i continue with the poem Holocaust or not? thanks i know its a bunch but please those are the ones i like the most, please tell me what u think. thanks

I'd be really grateful if you could check out some of mine, What I want, My war and My picture. (Any others if you'd like) thanks x

my three featured poems if you will
My hearts on fire
Addiction
How long?
thx

If you don't find can you plz check out these three pomes :

Always
In this world of broken dreams
Forever

thx !

okay, well please tell me what you think of my poems, if you wanna read anything thatd be cool, cause at this point i dont remember the ones i wanted to be read, but i knnow there "breathe into my life"or something like that...thanks