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Name : Steven Topaz
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Joined : Aug 11, 2008
Posts : 93

Put a poem on here of yours that you want critiqued as much as possible, (I do not vote unless you score a 5)
I give very long comments when im in the mood and now is one of them, Feel free to *caugh* praise a comment if you like it.

- Name : Italian Stallion
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- Posts : 8270
Italian Stallion
17 years ago

Can you please do:

We Will Forever Lay (Collab)

Thank you in advance, Joe

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- Name : Sole
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- Joined : Feb 19, 2006
- Posts : 669
Sole
17 years ago

Rose's Thorn

If you're still in the mood :P

Thanks, Sole xx

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- Name : Brittany C
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Brittany C
17 years ago

Please do

Lightning

Thanks =)

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- Name : Steven Topaz
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Steven Topaz
17 years ago

I will be tonight and italian i did your comment took about 15 mins i submitted it then i disconected from the internet. and it didnt submit

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- Name : Courageous Dreamer
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- Joined : May 18, 2008
- Posts : 9560
Courageous Dreamer
17 years ago

"A Beautiful Fairytale."

Thanks.(:

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- Name : Curing the Comon Cliche
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- Joined : Oct 27, 2007
- Posts : 194
Curing the Comon Cliche
17 years ago

Could you comment my poem

Vampire

Thank you.

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Name : Steven Topaz
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Joined : Aug 11, 2008
Posts : 93

Steven Topaz
17 years ago

To those of you still watching this topic and are going to look at it, I just had a smallish chink in my life occur tonight and commenting poems now would be haphazard, but I will try to get to them by the end of this weekend .

- Name : rhend
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- Joined : Aug 19, 2008
- Posts : 44
rhend
17 years ago

Please view and have comments on my poems

1.the temptress

2.shakespeare in sonnet

3. if i dream of you tonight

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- Name : Needer of You
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- Joined : Sep 30, 2005
- Posts : 76
Needer of You
17 years ago

Please critique my poems
1. Look at her
2. Its Love
3. Her Paper Heart

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- Name : Suicidal Love
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- Joined : Nov 12, 2007
- Posts : 287
Suicidal Love
17 years ago

Any of mine please

thanks xx

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- Name : Austin
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- Joined : Jul 20, 2008
- Posts : 186
Austin
17 years ago

Could you comment "The Wolf" please.

Thanks!

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- Name : Christina Gomes
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- Joined : Dec 11, 2004
- Posts : 180
Christina Gomes
17 years ago

"Destination Reached"

thank you =]

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- Name : isabel
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- Joined : Mar 28, 2007
- Posts : 240
isabel
17 years ago

Could you please do

"A Perfect Night" ?

Thank you ever so much

*isabel*

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- Name : Sumit Ojha
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- Joined : Aug 13, 2007
- Posts : 166
Sumit Ojha
17 years ago

Done!

Can you please do:

Princess

Sacrifice

Thank you in advance,

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- Name : PlasticSmile
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- Joined : Sep 8, 2007
- Posts : 18
PlasticSmile
17 years ago

Could you please comment "Maybe Tomorrow", It would mean alot, and i'd really appreciate it, thanks tons.

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