New Poem "Last Cry Out" 1 for 2

Please read my new poem called Last Cry Out (Our Last Hope).

You must be honest with your comments. Please put your two sense in it. Don't give me 1-3 lined comments. I really want to hear what you guys think of it.

After you read, rated and commented on it. Please post on here two of your poems you want me to read, rate, and comment on =)

Please do my two poems:
1. Happily Never After
2. It's Love

Done.
"Titled" and "Lightning" please [:

jess ~

Done!
"Maybe Tomorrow" &
"Mother"

Thanks,
:)

Nice job:)
please do
The crick of forbidden love
Hissing sounds of horror

Excellent write!

Can you please do any 2 that seem to catch your eyes.

Thank you in advance, Joe

I have commented on this poem.

Please pick two of mine for review; i do not care which.

Thank you guys for your comments. They really help me understand what I need to work on =)