1 R/R/C = 2 R/R/C

1 R/R/C = 2 R/R/C

I prefer criticism. I want to improve more than anything. I'm not bitter if you're a one-liner kinda person, though. I do give good comments [at least, they're what I consider good] and I give them no matter what I get. I'm completely honest. So, I'd appreciate 'real criticism' instead of one liners, but whatever floats your boat.

If you would do:
Bring forth the lost battles.

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Thanks in advance. :]

Done (:

"Maybe Tomorrow"
"Mother"

Thanks !

Done, please do

Winter Storm
and
untitled love poem

Thanks

Done.

Please review any two of the following:

Sex Drive (mature / erotic)
A Short Poets Tale
Pale Red Circles
Anti Me

Still waiting no a reply from His Angel. But, other than the one poem I'm done.

Anyone else?