Editing an exurpt in your poetry

  • OmniLotus
    12 years ago

    OK OK so here's the deal...post a stanza or line from one of your poems that your not so happy about or cant finish or just plain ol' confused about ^_^and lets see how we can get together to help each other from this cruel big block of writing

    my friend wrote:

    Repetition constant
    Every morning wake
    looking in the mirror
    the brush and paste i take.

    Colors upon fabric
    these clothes I.....

    thas all i can help with...any one care to share reply?

  • Skyfire
    12 years ago

    Colors upon fabric
    these clothes I've seen before?

    Not really sure what to do with the last two lines because i'm not sure what the intention is.