Down to the Ground. [doubled]

Comment my new poem titled "Down to the Ground." and any other poem if you'd like and i will double your efforts. :)

1. make all comments worthy of my reading; 1-3 liners are not acceptable (unless you write really long sentences or don't use punctuation very well.)

2. don't be afraid to give me harsh criticism on my work, but if you're going to do so you must back it up with examples on improving.

3. if you leave titles for me, please don't include any of the following: cutting/suicide, love, nature poems.

thank you. :)

Do what ever you like , unfortunately i do have alot of love poems , but they're more than likely diffrent than what you'd expect , so you can check them out if you like .

Done :)

I R/R/C the poem you asked for and "Hide and Seek"
: ) good job!
You can do which ever poems you want!