Thief of Hearts. [1 for 1 maybe 2]

New poem!

This one means a lot to me and I would appreciate some honest feedback on it. Take the time to leave me a heartfelt comment and rate and I will return the favor once maybe even twice, just depends on how good your comment was.

I praise comments worthy of being praised.

*Leave me a one-liner,
expect the same in return*

thanks! :]

Anyone?