Seeking Female input on erotic poem.

I am looking for some ladies to post comments on my newest poem. FAIR WARNING: it is very erotic.

I am a guy and tried to write it as if I were female.

The title is Lonely Nights

(I also have a previous one titled Feminine Perspectives. I will still match comments left on that one).

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In addition, I have another erotic piece called Drunk In Public that I will match comments on.

Thanks in advance.

I will ^.^

If you have a chance, please do "He Said". It's not finished, but I'd love your input.

Yeah, I forgot to run it through a spell check before I posted it. I fixed the typos.

Thanks for pointing this out.

Kali, your poem has been commented on.

CS

Any others?