Latest plz (and will return the favor)

My latest, Bottle it Up. It's the first poem I've written in a long long long long time where I felt I did a really good job on a poem. But I'd like your honest feed back plz and I'd be more than happy to return the favor.

Also, any others you read, rate and comment I'll return the favor on too. :)

K done yours.

Cross Crescent Candle please

Thx in advance;)

Thank you :) and returned the favor.

Did it! great job! check this one of mine, its a personal favorite..
Melodic
thanx!

Done...
my latest pleaes .. thanks :)

Lonely rider... did it.
Return the favor on Motivation & salvation for me? thanks!!!