Please read my poems

Could you please read my poems and give me advice to know if i need to inpove on some of my poems.

thank you

Rose.

Done... I gave suggestions that I felt were required ... hope you didnt mind :)

Thank you.

The poems that i would like people to read are the ones that have meaning such as "My lover died for me" "Run away girl" "I always love you, Grandma" "Save me form this never ending nightmare." and "Graduation"