First and last time I'll do this.

If you comment on

Hindsight
or
7

I will comment two of yours in detail, if you comment them both, I'll comment three of yours. I've been told my comments are useful/helpful and this is the last time I will do this because I'm submitting these for my assignment for university.

Let me know on the thread (with links) what poems you want doing.

Thanks :]

Danny

Hey , I commented on both .. But for some reason my computer won't let me copy and paste at all , so I can't give you links .. Would you pretty please go through my profile and just pick out any three that catch your eye ? Thankss , awesome stuff by the way .

Done :)

Refuge (Lies I had to tell) (Lyrics)

Might as well help, heh, getting comments back is a sure bonus.

I'll comment on both, would you please comment on 'Om Mani Padme Hum' and 'Hourglass(sss)' if you do decide to return the favour. I don't mind at all if you only do a comment-for-a-comment, since it's only fair.

Oh, links, forgot:
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1106491
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1098390

If you do the third, just, pick whichever title interests you and go from that, whatever, I don't mind.

I'll get right on it

Ah, thankyou! You are indeed a good writer of critique, I'll bear those lines in mind. Those two're some of the best of my 'newer' ones, so your review was helpful in getting me back into the swing of things.

Say, seeing your prowess, I might take you up on the third one.

Could you crit this one?
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1063858

Not obligatory, but meh. Just rerread it.

You only commented Hindsight and I've commented myriad flowers before. :)

I will comment yours when I get back from university :)

Thank you for the comments by the way