Out of Bounds -- Constructive commentry needed.

Well I'm a tad stuck.
I want to add a final stanza of some sort to my most recent poem "Out of Bounds." but nothing is coming to mind.

I'd love a bit of help on this one,
and of course will do the same to which ever poem you need.
Maximum 3, though.

http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1119775

Also, post links please.

(:

Any takers?

I had an attempt - hope I helped Lisa :)

PMed you. :)

Anyone else?