New Poem, "TrappeD" by .x.BluERiBBoN.x. - [[will return favour]]

Please check out my new sad poem called "TrappeD", and leave a comment. Constructive criticism is welcome, i'm trying out a new style. Thanks heaps in advance =)

I will return the favour

xx, PorteR

iv just read it and commented on it bt i thought id also commetn on it here, i loved the new style, i thought it worked really well,

wow, have jsut read your poem, and i really really liked it. very strong emotions left in such few words. i have left a comment.
polly
xxx
ps, if u geta chance i think u wud maybe like a few of mine.