you read mine, ill read yours

  • happy days
    20 years ago

    heya please can you read my new poem 'losing you' and ill comment on up to 3 of yours (plez tell me which ones)
    thank you
    xxxxx

  • polly
    20 years ago

    hi, i have read loosing you, and i found that it layed very near to my heart as i too have experianced a loss, as yours,not so long ago, so i can really relate to the emotions in the poem.
    it was very well written, witha strong structure.
    if you could plz read some of mine, 'seeking her grace', 'god take me while i sleep' and 'nursey rhyme of nightmares' and any others that you wish to read. thanks,
    polly
    xxx

  • bucky
    20 years ago

    good poem i liked it ... you don't have to comment on mine since you have before ... i was just returning the favor