Fruition; Comments. 1 for 2? :]

Please read/comment on my
newest piece `Fruition,` and I will
doubly return the favor.

Chop chop!
Thank you in advance! :D

I really loved that piece.
For me, would you do:
"Take My Hand" and "Fallen Soldiers".

Rachims, rachims, rachims. (:
You're too talented for your
own good, I suggest a transplant.
From me to you. hahahh.

Erm; could you take a look at--

Stumbled Steps.
&
King of Fools.

Maybe? Nice one. ;)

Thanks guys!, I'm getting to them ASAP.
Gasttlee, I've done one of yours, I'll try and
do the other tonight. And Lisanesssss, yours
are on tomorrow's agenda. :]]