Please tell me what you think, its my first poem...

sorry to be mean but anything called my boo sucks! sorry!

I dont agree with broken....I thought it was okay

i think its sweet

no need to be harsh...

the title turned me off, I'm sorry... it reminds me of that stupid song they always use to play..

as for the poetry itself, I thought it was too long winded, and more like a few statements. But as it being your first poem, I guess it was okay... Poetically it could use some work, although I'm sure the person you're writing this for will be deeply touched...

But don't let any of our comments discourage you... keep on writing..