One for one, two for two.

I just wrote a poem not too long ago. It is called 'My Perfection.' I shall return the favor if you do wish to comment. One for one, two for two. [[Please write the title of the poem[s] you would like me to read, I do get into a frenzy and try and pick a poem to comment and enjoy.]] Honest feedback would be appreciated also.
Thank you.
-Waking Freedom

I commented. :) If you could please return the favour on my latest: "The Man and the Boy on the Moon" - thanks.