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Hey I haven't been on here in so long!
I just posted 2 poems that I wrote last year and I was hoping to get some feedback on them both, I will return the favor and comment on 3 of yours!

Have read you two latest poems don't be disappointed at my comments as they are good poems but not unique you have great potential and I think with more experience and a lot of reading you could be on the competition winners list in no time Ray S

I liked your second poem alot

plz just do my two latest

A path that must be found
and
Earthen Burial.

You are so talented. i really enjoyed reading your poems. :)

could you please do any of mine.

thanks heaps :)

Oh but i'd really appreciate if you read the latest one i put up today. thankyou once again :)

Thank You!

Anyone else?
Please rate and comment.

Done... nice work. Please do my 3 intitled "Letters in the Sand" "I see the World" and "When angels sleep"