I'm Back. :] (xTheEcstasyofSuicidex) [1.for.3]

And What A Tragedy It Would Be If I Lay Among the Dead Men.

Read that. This is the first prose I've written in over a year, so I'm a bit rusty, but do let me know what you think, honestly.

RULES:
o1. Read, Comment (NO ONE-WORD COMMENTS), and Rate.
o2. If it's a one-word comment, I will NOT comment back. Make it worth my time.
o3. NO love poems or friendship. No one YET has written a love poem I can stand; they're all cliche and trashy. And my computer doesn't allow me to go to friendship poems, for some reason.
o4. Leave the name of three poems for me to read, rate, and comment in here. I'll get to them as soon as I can.

With that being said...
I'm not a btch, I'm just honest. The comments I leave WILL have criticism. But, isn't that how we learn? So, it might be worth your while after all.

I will rate what I think is fair, as well.

Other tha that, please enjoy my prose and I look forward to any comments I have to do. :]

xxx.
xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

Ok i havent written in a while and am looking for some decent critism so please be honest i need it please do these
Distant dream
burning
sonnet
please and thank you

Finished. Could you please comment on my lyrics

Automatic Fate
Coward and
Lock the Door
Thank you

Peace and prosperity,

(RKD)

I'm in.
Please read my latest three that meet your no-love/no-frienship standards.

please and thank you.

Spirit and mercy--

i'll get to your comments soon. probably over the weekend. thank you for comments and the fact of being polite. it's called manners. :]

by the way --
everyone? if you downvote me because you're jealous, i probably WON'T comment you; get a hint.

thank you.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

What about mine? I honestly commented on your "work", I would like my comments.

You're not taking the hint, but i'll comment your "lyrics", which i've already told you i'll tear you apart.

i'm not worried about it, like i said a hundred times; get the hint.

now. GOODbye.

love,
xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

Still waiting for my comments

Hmm well this is interesting :)
I'll do that now.
I think you might like "PAST"

Umm.... waiting

I miss you <3
(I'll read your poem soon, promise!)