Honest Critiques: WANTED!

xD I would love for some honest criticism and votes. Haven't been getting much lately. ^^; Also, any ideas for Writing, though I don't really have difficulty getting some; I'd just like to here what you've all got say. Please and thank you. =) Featured Poems are a lot of my favorites, but my more recent ones are too. So anything, though is great!

Always,
Manda