Recently posted poem that means alot to me....

I wrote a poem just a minute ago actually and im really keen to find out what people think. Its called "Or can you not see?" and it is a sad poem. If anybody could read and comment/vote at all it would really mean tons.
thankyou,
ellie
xoxoxo

sorry chica, i couldn't find it. i found your other poems, but no "Or can you not see?"