My poems, what am i doing wrong?

Hey i feel like i can do better with my poems, i could use help on my poems, by you guys out there, i know you are all better then me, and i could really use your help..

Please help- search Madison!

Hey I dont think im very good at writing poems either but too someone around the world one of your poems are the best peom they have ever read because it relates to them in some way. Go with the flow and dont be scared to write EXACTLY how you feel. Thats what i do anyway