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I have my new poem titled My Story. I think so far this is my best poem. I hope everyone enjoys it. It really means a lot to me and I hope everyone who's gonna read it will know. Any comment or suggestions are well appreciated and I promise to return the favor and do the same. Thank you so much everyone!!!!=)

I hope that everyone will give there own opinion about it thanks!!! =)